Once again, I feel a bit sorry for the novelist for being critizied for having made mistakes in his choice of dictions and sentence structure or use of wrong words.
Basically, I understand our SIS has provided a service to the readers to comment the mistakes of the original novel. But personally I think it is the obligations of all the readers to show their sincere support and encouragements to the writer or novelist FIRST before they blundtly display the mistakes they have dug out. Appreciation of others' efforts and contributions are our basic politeness.
This novel itself has embodied a very high technique of literaly writing, especially in his carefull selection of words to depict the inward mixed and suspending feelings of the main male character when he is preparing to seduce his aunt. It is generally difficult for a novelist to give a successful describing of the psychological symptoms of the characters when or before he/she has prepared to commit a sinful action, especially those involved with incest and adulteries because these are fundamentarily against the social norm. We may have read hundreds of such similar stories about incest and adultery. Most of them simply described how the male has seduced the female and then followed countless love making. The sex actions are kept on and on again until you feel tired of them. Interestingly, the male has always been described as a superman who can keep on making love without stopping. (Having taken Viagra, I suppose)
But the novelist in this story has rejected the usualy "woman, bed, loving making and loving making and then another woman, bed and ceasely love making". He starts not with immediate sex making, but by detailly describing the inward conflicts of the character's confusion - to be or not to be. That is to say, whether he will do that or not. This sort of conflicting feeling is very common in our daily life. We always face such situation of deciding to do this or not, like buying stock shares, turning right or left when we have missed the way. A wrong decision will sometimes carry lots of mistakes and rependence afterwards.
After showing the inward fear, excitement and sexual expectations, the novelist starts to depit the physical and verbal actions of the character. It is very amusing to read the words used by the male charactor to lead his aunt to fall step by step into his trap. Such a technique is very seldomly used by the other adult story writers who will instead describe how strong the male character is and immediately captures the female object and starts lots of love makings. For this writer, his character is put in a well plotted way that gradually build up the sexual atmosphere by talking bit by bit his incest sexual experiences with his aunt's cousins. The result of this is to build up a good suspense for the readers to chase after and will ask "Come on, what will follow next".
The female character, the aunt, is also very successfully presented. Her disbelieve, rejection and forced to believe and finally induced by the explicit sexual descriptions to the last stage of accepting the temptations are clearly presented.
Thus, I do not agree to the other comments that this novel is just as common as the novels of the similar nature. This novel has made it out shining the other novels in its wonderful and skillfully manipulations of an excellent literay writing.
This is a novel deserves high recommendations.
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